What is a common mistake when integrating evidence into a paragraph?

• A. Dropping in quotes or data without explanation.
• B. Always provide long quotes.
• C. Paraphrase everything without citation.
• D. Use evidence only as background.

Answer: (A)

When you bring evidence into a paragraph, the point is to show how that evidence supports your argument, not just to present facts. The best answer reflects that by highlighting how the data or quotes connect to your claim through explanation or analysis.

The common misstep is dropping in quotes or data without explaining what it means or why it matters. Without that bridge, the reader can quickly wonder how the evidence supports your point, and the paragraph feels like a collection of facts rather than a guided argument. To do it well, introduce the evidence with a brief lead-in, present the quote or data, and then tell the reader what you infer from it—the interpretation, significance, or implication for your claim. This might be a sentence that translates the evidence into your argument, or a short analysis that shows the cause-and-effect or contrast the evidence reveals.

Keep quotes concise and relevant, and when you paraphrase, still include a citation. Use evidence not just as background, but as a component that advances your point, always tying it back to your thesis. This approach makes the writing cohesive and persuasive.